正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I study at Sun primary school. It is very famous in this city. I am glad to study in this school. There are three buildings and a playground in this school. What's more, My teachers are very friendly. They always tries their best to teach us some good ways to learn subjects well. And we usually play football in P.E. class. After class often play games with my classmates. I like my school very much.