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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。
As we all know, computer and internet occupy more and more homes, and we are not able to stop it. Maybe some day the situation where the parents are in will come true, and we would like to talk by computer rather than face-to-face, but if we are family, I don't think there is any possibility to be the parents or that "andy" in the picture, because it is not convenient, the addvantage of computer and internet is convenient, I'd rather speak loudly in home with my mother than talk online. But if I talk with my coworkers, the internet is a better choice. It is easy to understand that face-to-face contact is not only talk, when we meet each other, we hug, kiss, touch, and then talk. There are so many things that only can be done by face-to-face communicate, additionally, these things are often more important and easy to work out some problems, for example, when you argue with your girlfriend, a hug is better than thousands of words.
