希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;缺少组织,上下文衔接欠流畅;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。
As we all know,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.But why?Now let me tell you. Let's start from a example:if we plan to run a company,and we have 100 yuan,what should we do? we should put all money in running the company or put 50 yuan in while keeping another 50 yuan? The answer is the second one.Only in this way,we can stay alive when the company meet danger. So,don't put all you egg in one basket,so that we can rebuilt the company when it get in trouble.