文章衔接手法恰当;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用。
Angel is my best friend.She is thirty three years old. She is an engineer. She is working for a big company. She often busy,but she always smile, and She is great to helping others.So she is very popular. But she has a problem.she always stay in bed later and get up later too.