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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11299
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分49.0分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

As the science and technology is ddeveloping rapidly,more and more people have started using moblie phone in modern life. There seems to be no big problem,but everying has two sides. If more and more people reply on the mobile phone in themselves. You will find that people bow to serious play mobile phone in the street. The world will be less kind. However these are no absolute, mang things are convenient becauese of mobile phone. We can know mang news from it. So we should reasonable use our moblie phone, make it service our life.

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