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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次较为清晰。
My views on Online Shopping Nowadays, on Online Shopping is more and more popular. The reasons are that having a lot of benefits. However, there are many problems about it. Take me for an example, i brought a shirt online last week. I imagined it would be very nice and comfortable for me, but it lost me a lot. As long as i saw it's picture online, it attracted me suddenly. In conclusion, i want to turn back the shirt. It warns people that what you see is not true. In addition, you will be concerned about why delivering slowly. This condition is worth paying attention that you could be swindled so you that lost your money if you believed that. In a word, Online Shopping has advantage and disadvantage, thought it is, we should take carefully to buy things online.
