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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写。
With the society rapidly developing, more and more people live a great life. However, it is terrible for them to be it which will affect more people forget their future. Because they don't want to achieve their dream rather than they will live a corrupt life. Meanwhile, Not only lose life forward, but also they may be lose some friends. If they don't want to go outside with firends, they will be far away from them. There are some example that my friends lose life confidence, which choose stay at home rather than talking with us. It is very difficult for him to talk with us. Because we don't have a common with each other. It is very barrassed for us when we go outside together. In my pinion, we should do some valuable things. Such as do reading, do excesise and spend more time with our family, Because family needs moderaty and together. In a word, I wish everyone could develop a good habit so that live a great life.
可可英语 - 划词释义
