3、词数80左右(首句已给出,不计算在总词数之内)。
文章层次较为清晰;多多加强从句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇量偏小,且文章中拼写错误较多。
Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life.In a trip,we have some habits.for example,fight with other,broke envirmental,and waste food.they are very wrong.we should protect envirmental.Don't waste food and water,because water and food are life,either.Writing is impolite in building.money is neccerary in life,so we should not waste money.Don't fight with other,because it is a bad habit.As a student,we must protect envirment.We should like envirmental,protect envirmental.