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全文结构较为严谨；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。
There is a hot debate over what can we do about our own activities. Some people believe that the problems have already caused can not be eliminated,while other believe that there are still some methods that we could do to reduce the effects. people who believe that it is impossible to overcome the factor reasult from our action have been taken for our glogbal and lives here. To a certain level, to elimanate the causes can be difficult due to the technolgy limitation in the currrent society we lived in. However, nothing is immpossible. if we try to improve our knowledge the problems may be settled in the future. Further more, the improvenment over the current situation is a matter of time. In the futher, as the development of technology the sencenist must find a way the overcome the problem. they are going to make our energy more clean ,our mission more less and harmful, our life more convenient. To sum up, to elimanate the entire damage to the world can be difficult,but as the time pass, we are going to find a way to improve the situation in a efficient and effective way.
