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新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint7 单元测试写作:介绍黄山

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:06浏览次数:6182
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安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。


请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山(the Yellow Mountain )。

(1)位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。

(2)乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。
(3)登山便可领略其云海(the sea of clouds)、奇松(wondrous pines )、怪石(unique rocks)等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。


注意 

1. 词数:80 词左右。

2. 请不要逐字翻译

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