2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；文中词汇表达较为灵活，学术词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

computer is a kind of great creation in human's history.the invention changes a lot in our work and life.but everything has two sides,so the computer. for the truth,when i wake up everyday,after breakfast or in just on the seat in company,the first i do is turn on the computer.i do excel,word,ppt on computer,i surf the internet to get useful information on computer,i see what's happening around the world on computer,i read books,listen music,play games,talk with friends and so on and just can not leave computer.but in fact,all i do on computer are just something easy or disadvantage,many great guys use computer to do lots of amazing things that is just changing our world. but on the contrary,with computer getting more and more popular,it also take some problems.i remember when i was young,i always step out to play with my little friends to enjoy sports,but now we always just sit down and use mouse to play computer games,becoming not active,maybe to somebody ,not just negtive,it's poison or addictive.i don't think it's good especially to young audolecences. so,computer is not the god,everybody should use computer to do something positive,and should have poperty eyes on it.do not get addictid.