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Advertisement is such a part of our everyday lives and so much taken for granted nowadays that rarely think twice when a new product is advertised on the screen. Recently, the advertisement heated debates have sprought up as to the positive and negative effects of the advertisement. As regards the controversay, everybody has his own interpretation. Advocates in favor of the application of advertisement, insist that it is inevitably time-saving tool which provides us with required information and multiple options in every facets of life. On the contrary, opponents on his side hold that advertisement is likely to offer misleaded information which not only threaten our lives ,but also does harm to commerical development and the public's mental psychology. Weighing up the two viewpoint above, i'm inclined that we need valid and conducive advertisements under related department's supervision. In the first place, the genuine and useful message guide us to choose the best stuff we are really fond of in these advertisements. Besides, it is an effective way to furtherance business prosperity. And an sttractive may appeal to the consumer's attention, which surly contributes to the end of great demand in the good. Moreover, the goverment have the commitment to ensure advertisement in a validityand truth, avoid those flase and misleading advertisements as possible. In the light of all these factors, we may reasonably arrived at the conclusion that advertisement is an indispensable element of modern society.
