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拼写做的很棒，高级词汇可适量增加；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
Nowadays, our human race is more and more associated with the change of environment. In spite of some problems we have realized, due to the pollution is fierce, the final answer ironically is not getting enhanced. So, what we should do could be a suitable way to balance the relationship between our human beings and nature? As for the problems, different people hold different views. Some pessimistic people are under the impression that the nature has been changed into so bad situation that we have no ability to change anything. In other words, they mean we can do nothing but wait for death. But most people do believe that we are able to solve the problems. It's undeniable that we had done a variety of ruinous activities to our nature ever. And still now things seem to be worse, though some effective measures have taken. But they consider that we always have capacity to make nature recover from this situation now. In my opinion, we should take actions to protect the environment immediately, and everyone of us should understand that solving the problems of environment deterioration are not someone's duty, but our individuals' responsibility. In conclusion, I personally assume that the actions and behaviors of protecting nature should be encouraged with the combined efforts by the government and average persons. Only in this way can we make an unprecedented change to our nature. Nonetheless, there is still a long way for us to go and maybe we shouldn't be too optimistic about we can hold back environment deterioration .
可可英语 - 划词释义
