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文中衔接词丰富；有效的运用了一些复杂句；作者能较丰富地使用学术词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误。
There is a hot debate over what can we do about our own activities. Some people believe that the problems have already caused cannot be eliminated,while other believe that there are still some methods that we could do to reduce the effects. people who believe that it is impossible to overcome the factor result from our action have been taken for our global and lives here. To a certain level, to eliminate the causes can be difficult due to the technology limitation in the curent society we lived in. However, nothing is impossible. If we try to improve our knowledge the problems may be settled in the future. Further more, the improvenment over the current situation is a matter of time. In the futher, as the development of technology the sencenist must find a way the overcome the problem. they are going to make our energy much clean ,our mission much less and harmful, our life more convenient. To sum up, to eliminate the damage entirly to the world can be difficult,but as the time pass, we are going to find a method to improve the situation in an efficient and effective way.
