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2001年专八英语作文真题:网络对教育的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:04浏览次数:5952
要求:
The Internet is about to take off in China. As many as 9 million people are online, a number that is estimated to hit 20 million by the end of 2000. It is predicted that this phenomenal growth will have great impact on our society and economy. Choose ONE aspect of our society or economy where you think the impact will be most strongly felt, and write an essay of about 300 words entitled.
THE IMPACT OF THE INTERNET ON ...
In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failur e to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
Write your composition on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
用户的作文(系统评分48.0分
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高级词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;简单句偏多了;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

用户练习作文:

Internet is broaden as times goes by. Undoubtely, Internet plays a crucial role in our soceity. Initially, internet makes our live even conveneint. E-commerce is a business oppotunity which popular in recent years. TaoBao, everyone is not strange about it. Commodities are purchased through the Internet. We are not troubled by parking and queue line any more. Furtherly, Internet unable us to contact with our relatives frequently. Wechat is an app, invented by Tenxun corporate.

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