高级词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;简单句偏多了;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Internet is broaden as times goes by. Undoubtely, Internet plays a crucial role in our soceity. Initially, internet makes our live even conveneint. E-commerce is a business oppotunity which popular in recent years. TaoBao, everyone is not strange about it. Commodities are purchased through the Internet. We are not troubled by parking and queue line any more. Furtherly, Internet unable us to contact with our relatives frequently. Wechat is an app, invented by Tenxun corporate.