Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;全文结构较为严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
In the current,the number of people use Internet to contact with each other.Indeed,Internet help us a lot,such as chatting with friends without going out,informing someone within the shortest time,etc.So ,we should be grateful that we were born in such time. However, It is so convenient that the Internet makes us lacking many mental experiences. In fact,face-to-face communication are better for us to understand what people said though their expressions,actions,and intonation.We also can experience the deeper emotion that they share to us.And in this way,we can show our sincereness and respect.But,with technology developing,many people turn their face to the Internet.That made us lose many thing.we hide in the bedroom a whole day rejecting to talk and exercise.Gradually,our health will be poor and maybe we will become not skilled at communication. Therefore,face-to-face communication can't be replaced by electronic Internet.And,here,I want to appeal everybody to support face-to-face contact.With the life rythem in the high speed,we should sit down with a calm heart and talk with people facially.