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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12880
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

In the current,the number of people use Internet to contact each other.Indeed,Internet helps us a lot,such as chatting with friends without going out,informing someone within the shortest time,etc.So ,we should be grateful that we were born in such time. However, It is so convenient that the Internet makes us lack many mental experiences. In fact,face-to-face communication are better for us to understand what people said though their expressions,actions,and intonation.We can also experience the deeper emotion that they share to us.And,in this way,we can show our sincereness and respect.But,with technology developing,many people turn their face to the Internet.That made us lose many things.we hide in the bedroom a whole day rejecting to talk and exercise.Gradually,our health will be poor and maybe we will become not skilled at communication. Therefore,face-to-face communication can't be replaced by electronic Internet.And,here,I want to appeal to everybody for supporting face-to-face contact.With the life rhythm in the high speed,we should sit down with a calm heart and talk with people facially.

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