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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71623
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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My hometown,a beautiful place in the south of Hunan province. There are many curious mountains with 4 big river. So it be called Sunshine Four Rivers by our native. especially, Heng mountain, one of the Five Mountains, is the most famous mountain in my hometown.If you are going to there i think this mountain you should to go sight-seeing. And my hometown is famous for its local ethnic snacks. for example, Stinky tofu and Zi ba. i think you will like it.

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