2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

My hometown,a beautiful place, is in the south of Hunan province. There are some curious mountains with 4 big rivers. So it been called Sunshine Four Rivers by our native. Especially, Heng mountain, one of the Five Mountains, is the most famous mountain in my hometown.If you are going there I think this mountain you should to go sight-seeing. And my hometown is famous for its local ethnic snacks, for example Stinky tofu and Zi ba. I think you will like it.