2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用。

My hometown,a beautiful place, is in the south of Hunan province. There are a lot of odd shape mountain with 4 big rivers. So it been called Sunshine Four Rivers by our native. Especially, Heng mountain, one of the Five Mountains, is the most famous mountain in my hometown.If you are going there I think this mountain you should to go sight-seeing. And my hometown is famous for its local ethnic snacks, for example Stinky tofu and Zi ba. I think you will like it.