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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9751
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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There is a hot debate over what can we do about our own activities. Some people believe that the problems have already caused cannot be eliminated,while other believe that there are still some methods that we could do to reduce the effects. People who believe that it is impossible to overcome the factor result from our action have been taken for our global and lives here. To a certain level, to eliminate the causes can be difficult due to the technology limitation in the current society we lived in. However, nothing is impossible. If we try to improve our knowledge the problems may be settled in the future. Further more, the improvenment over the current situation is a matter of time. In the future, with the development of technology the sentient must find a method the overcome the problem.They are going to make our energy much cleaner ,our mission much less and harmfulless, our life much more convenient. To sum up, to eliminate the damage entirly to the world can be difficult,but as the time pass, we are going to find a method to improve the situation in an efficient and effective way.

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