雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

With the development of economy and convenience of traffic,more and more people go abroad to look outside of the world .It is a fashionable tendency for modern people to relax and raise themselves . As a hot point , is traveling to other countries debated by people .Some people think that it has positive effects .first of all , it will widen our view and learn more about local customs and practices .As Chinese old saying goes,it is better to travel ten thousand miles than read ten thousand books .Secondly ,people can taste various delicious food when they travel around the world .Delicacy food play an important role in the high level of life. Thirdly,it is a good opportunity to use the foreign language and meanwhile it will stimulate your enthusiasm to learn foreign language.Further more,people can make news friends during the trip,which can enlarge their communication circles.Finally , travelling brings us a lot spiritual experience besides relaxation our physical . I always believe that either reading books or travelling around is necessary for the people who pursuits the brilliant future .It is a good method to improve the insight . As far as I concert ,travelling abroad has so many positive effects ,but it still exists some negative effects . Referring travel ,we haven't to avoid considering personal safety affairs.Especially, we often listen to the news about terrorist attack in many foreign countries .Therefore ,we must take the security into account before we decide to travel .Meanwhile ,we would spend money 、time 、energy on travelling .We should balance our life and work when we consider to have an abroad trip . Is travelling to the other country a positive or negative effect ? In my opinion , positive effects overweight negative effects.I hope I can have a chance to learn more about the different culture and costumes from all over the world and enjoy the distinguish beautiful things from the world.