文章上下文衔接自然;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;多多注意文中错误的句子。
I am glad to introduce my hometown.In recent years,my home town change a lot.In the past,there was a plenty of trees.The river was clean.Thus,you can see fish playing in the river.But houses was small and roads was narrow. People need to work harding,but still was poor.Nowdays,you can see skyscraper anywhere.And traffic is deveolping.However,the industry lead to environment became terrible.As a reslut,there was not a number of trees and fish was disappeared.Therefore,it is important that to govern environment.