高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；简单句有点多，从句数量使用不足；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

I am glad to introduce my hometown. In recent years,my home town change a lot. In the past, there was a plenty of trees that made place bacome beautiful. The river was clean.Thus,you can see fish was playing in the river. But houses were small and roads was narrow. Persons were poor that need to work harding. Nowdays,you can see skyscraper anywhere.And traffic is developing. However, the industry lead to environment became bad. As a reslut, there was not a number of trees and fish was disappeared. Therefore, it is important that to manage the environment.