高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章组织结构良好；简单句偏多，应增加从句使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

I am glad to introduce my hometown. In recent years, my home town change a lot. In the past, there was a plenty of trees that made place bacome beautiful. The river was clean.Thus, you can see fish was playing in the river. But houses were small and roads was narrow. Persons were poor that need to work harding. Nowdays,you can see skyscraper anywhere. The traffic was which develop very fast . However, the industry lead to environment became bad. As a reslut, there was not a number of trees and fish was disappeared. Therefore, it is important that to manage the environment.