高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；文章组织结构良好；从句不足，简单句比重高。

I am glad to introduce my hometown. In recent years, my home town has change a lot. In the past, there was a plenty of trees that made space become beautiful. The river was clean.Thus, you can see fish was playing in the river. But houses were small and roads was narrow. Persons were poor that require to hard working. Nowadays,you can see skyscraper anywhere. The transportation was which develop very fast . However, the industry lead to environment became bad. As a result, there was not a number of trees and fish was disappeared. Therefore, it is important that to manage the environment.