全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;注意句式在文中的变化,加强一些从句的使用,文章会更棒。
Following the people's life became batter and batter,more and more people had thier own cars. But diffient student has diffrient views. Some student think that this is a good thing. First of all, car is good transportation which convinent、fast and comfortable.Secondly, it can react some things which change people's life a lot and prosperous country. What's more, it can put other business developing. The other student think that to many cars lead to a plenty of issues.Firstly, the serious things was that the flue gas pollution became a big problem. Besides, it is terrible things that a number of cars will influence transportation and lead to more traffic accident. Furthermore, the parking became a salient problem.