2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays Today,we have big probrom that have to face. this picture tell us education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment .According to this picture, we can know doctoral degree earn the higher money. And doctoral degree's unemployment rate is low. Less than high school diploma have less money and they have higher unemployment rate. So,we must concern education. It is very important that goverment add vest to education pays.Specially,some less than school diploma, high school diploma and no degree.Goverment must promote people's degree.This idea can make unemployment rate down and indivase people's earns. In my opnion,every goverment should care about education. Because children are hope for country.Though,we must indease edcation pays.