全文结构较为严谨;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;高级词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些,拼写检查还需加强。
Following the people's life became better and better,more and more people's had their own cars. But diffrient student has diffrient views. Some student think that it is a good thing. First of all, car is good transportation which covenient、fast and comfortable.Secondly, it can reflect some things which change people's life a lot and prosperous country. What's more, it can put other business developing. The other student think that it lead to a lot of issues. Firstly, the serious thing was that the flue gas pollution became a big problem. Besides, it is terrible things that a number of cars will influence transportation and lead to more traffic accident. Furthermore, the parking became a salient problem.