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全文结构较为严谨；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，但词汇表达丰富度不足。
Following people's life became better and better,more and more people had their own cars. But deffrient student has deffrient views. Some students think that it is a good thing. First of all, car is good transportation which convenient、fasting and comfortable.Secondly, it can reflect some things which change people's life a lot and prosperous country. What's more, it can put other business developing. The other students think that it is lead to a lot of issues. Firstly, the serious thing was that the flue gas pollution became a big problem. Besides, it is terrible things that a number of cars will influence transportation and lead to more traffic accident. Furthermore, the parking became a salient problem.
