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Following people's life became better and better,more and more people had their own cars. But different student has different views. Some students think that it is a good thing. First of all, Cars are good transportation which convenient、fast and comfortable. Secondly, it can reflect some things which change people's life a lot and prosperous country. What's more, it can put other business developing. The other students think that to many cars lead to a lot of issues. Firstly, the serious thing was that the flue gas pollution became a big problem. Besides, it is terrible things that a number of cars will influence transportation and lead to more traffic accident. Furthermore, the parking became a salient problem.