句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Following people's life became better and better,more and more people had their own cars. But different student has different views. Some students think that cars give us a lot of benefits. First of all, Cars are good transportation which convenient,fast and comfortable. Secondly, it can reflect some things which change people's life a lot and prosperous country. What's more,Cars can drive the development of other industries. The other students think that to many cars cause a lot of issues. Firstly, the serious thing was that the flue gas pollution became a big problem. Besides, it is terrible things that a number of cars will influence transportation and lead to more traffic accident. Furthermore, the parking became a salient problem.