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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11492
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

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I will be available from the June 7th to 12th to join the exhibition as a docent. I am very glad that i have this opportunity working with BV team and trying to do my best at the exhibition. There is no doubt that honest is an essential quality in modern society. Of course we can't lie at something which are against the law or deliberately cheat someone for personal benefits. But in our daily life, always telling the truth shouldn't be the most important consideration in any relationship. As we know, human relationship is very complicated. Telling the truth will not always be a gift as you may expect, it can be a poison, not just for someone you talked to the truth but also maybe for yourself too. I could like to give some examples for that. Can you image a parents always tell the truth to their children, I don’t mean the parents cheat their children on purpose, but some of the things they have said to them are just not so really, like tales ,Father Christmas or something like that. Besides, people have experienced some horrible accidents every year, like earthquakes or terrorist attacks. If those things happened on your life, and you want to comfort your children , it’s not wise to tell them that life is full of accidents and we can’t control those events. Some parents may say love can conquer everything , which is very useful when a child experienced something terrible. But obviously for many adults, love can't be so powerful, not to mention to change everything.

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