2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework. Theyhave so much homework to do every day. And they feel stressed too much. About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them(in their studies)It’s difficult for them to get along /on well with their parents .The other twenty per cant of them think they are weak in health .They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities. Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad , we want to take more exercise to keep fit /healthy /stay healthy .We will try /do our best and we also want to play on our own.