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Our school has made a survey -----“Don’t keep your worries ”.Here are the results.Nowdays,one second student think homework so much from school.studying pleasures are much too big.Three tenth student think parents are strict in their,and parents communicate so little with their children.one fifths student think very little of activity.Student should do some exercise to keep health,and don't study too much.Although study is very important,but body healthy more imporant than study.