高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

I am a football fan. It is important thing to me witch playing football. I like palying soccer by chance. One day, when I went back my home, i picked up a football. Therefore, i forgot to go home and decided on playing soccer with my friends. Form that time, I falled down the palying football. I always training with my friends and taking part in competation. It is my favorite soccer player who is Beckham. My biggest dream is that becaome a professional football palyer. My father said to me:"If you want to become a professional player, you need to hard working. You can not give up by any difficlut things. " Thus, I took my father's advice. I think that I can be a famous soccer player in the future.