在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I am a football fan. It is important things to me which playing football. I like palying soccer by chance. One day, when i went back my home, i picked up a football. Therefore, I forgot to go home and decided on playing soccer with my friends. Form that time, I falled down the playing football. I always training with my friends and taking part in competition. It is my favorite soccer player who is Beckham. My biggest dream is that become a professional football player. My father said to me:"If you want to become a professional player, you need to hard working. You can not give up by any difficult things. " Thus, I took my father's advice. I think that I can be a famous soccer player in the future.