高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

I am a football fan. It is important things to me which playing football. I like playing soccer by chance. One day, when i went back my home, i picked up a football. Therefore, I forgot to go home and decided on playing soccer with my friends. Form that time, I fall down the playing football. I always train myself with my friends and take part in competition. It is my favorite soccer player who is Beckham. My biggest dream is become a professional football player. My father said to me:"If you want to become a professional player, you need to hard working. You can not give up. " Thus, I took my father's advice. I think that I can be a famous soccer player in the future.