2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；文中能较好的使用一些高级词汇，不过拼写错误比较多。

As the development of technology, human being sets up a profundly connection with the computers. Computer plays a important role in our moderen society, and we become the elctronic nation. From my prespective, computer is a double-edged sword.Its apperance and wide use have an effect on society. It may bring interests to the society and may bring damage as well.We can do all our work on computer,and ger information from it.It is also convenient to delivery the message.At the same time,computer reduce the times of our communtion face to face.