2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Strong will is the gurantee of success. success is not easy,because you should keep a patience when you face the failure.Strong will make you pay attention to the reason of you failure and encourage you keep moving to you aim. If a man want to complished a great misson, he should full of strong will in his heart.The way to access success not always smooth.It's usual that you would face with many challenge or get trouble in some things. So,you should developed a strong will to against passive emotion. Student also should developed a strong will.Study hard to obtain a great grade,otherwise, they maybe fail in many important exam and lost many chance of life.