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In the current,with the WeChat becoming more and more popularly,many people use it to share the instant-messages,such as voice,texts,expression,pictures and vedioes,etc.Apsrt from the above what I mentioned,WeChat also has other functions.So It becomes a part of people's lives. Because life rhythm is so fast that we can't adjust ourselves in time,most of us are stressful.so we need a access to release. In fact,WeChat helps us a great deal.As a communication tool,it is convenient for us to contact others.Or sometimes,we can use the shortest time to inform our parterns missions.As an entertainment tool,we can share something showing our feelings and moods at anywhere or anytime.In brief,we can benefit a lot from it. However,WeChat also has weaknesses.Parts of people would be addicted to it,like playing computer games.And from the WeChat itself,it also would spread some uncivilized news or messages.With the unfit scandles around us,we may be led to a bad road.Our friends-circle are full of private products sold by some people.It may make our private information lose. Therefore,we should protect ourselves as possible as we can.Using and learn it in the right way.