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In the current,with the WeChat becoming more and more popularly,many people use it to share the instant-messages,such as voice,texts,expression,pictures and vedioes,etc.Apart from the above what I mentioned,WeChat also has other functions.So It becomes a part of people's lives. Because life rhythm is so fast that we can't adjust ourselves in time,most of us are stressful.so we need an access to release. In fact,WeChat helps us a great deal.First of all,as a communication tool,it is convenient for us to contact others.In addition,as an entertainment tool,we can share somethings showing our feelings at anywhere or anytime. However,WeChat also has weaknesses.Some of people would be addicted to it,similarly playing computer games.And from the WeChat itself,it also would spread some uncivilized messages.With the unfit scandles around us,we may be led to a wrong way.Our friends-circles are full of private products sold by some people.It may make our private information lose. Therefore,we should protect ourselves as possible as we can.Using and learn it in the right way.
