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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71635
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用高级词汇;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。

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In the current,with the WeChat becoming more and more popularly,many people use it to share the instant-messages,such as voice,texts,expression,pictures and vedioes,etc.Apart from the above what I mentioned,WeChat also has other functions that can give us accesses to relax or keep a pace with society.So It becomes a part of people's lives. Because life rhythm is so fast that we can't adjust ourselves in time,most of us are stressful.so we need an access to release. In fact,WeChat helps us a great deal.First of all,as a communication tool,it is convenient for us to contact others.In addition,as an entertainment tool,we can share some things showing our feelings at anywhere or anytime. However,WeChat also has weaknesses.Some of people would be addicted to it,similarly playing computer games.And from the WeChat itself,it also would spread some uncivilized messages.With the unfit scandles around us,we may be led to a wrong way.Our friends-circles are full of private products sold by some people.It may make our private information lose. Therefore,we should protect ourselves as possible as we can.Using and learn it in the right way.

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