语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;熟练使用了一些长难句;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
There is a problem that the bags was widely use in our society,people was used to use bag when they are out of the supermarket and then they will throw away it usually,which rusult in the bags become more and more.In fact,it is disadvantage for human and nature. In my opinion,we should be limiting the use of disposal bags as soon as possible.Maybe,someone will ask the reason,why we need take action for it?Use of disposal bags is better for all of people,and it's convinience for us.Actually,plastic product is not easy to break down,if we use it once and once so that it will become too much in our life,on a long view,our environment will be break down ,the most important is will be effect our life,we are going to face the problem. In conclusion,it is necessary to limiting the use of disposal bags .