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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

A new ocean aquarium recently opened in Guangzhou City, providing the public with the opportunity to view sea animals and learn about their life. But not everyone is happy. Those who oppose the practice of keeping sea animals in aquariums argue that the basic concept of "displaying animals to public for entertainment" is unacceptable. No human would accept being locked away and denied the opportunity to explore the world. The same logic works in case of animals. Humans cannot boast of being a superior species yet deny freedom to another group of animals simply for their own amusement. Supporters of aquariums and zoos, on the other hand, say that such facilities, help protect endangered animals, raise public awareness about the need for environmental protection and educate the public. So, should aquariums (and zoos) be banned? Write a composition of about 150 words outlining your opinion and provide supporting reasons.

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