作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
A trip in june is always thrilling.June weather is usually warm and great.It is very suitable for travelling.On the journey you can hike, biking or driving a car.A trip indeed does good to yourself.You can enjoy yourself without anything disturbing,and relax your mind.Moreover,a fascinating place over your trip is great.You will be so pleasure.