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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Disabled people are a special group in our country ,even in the world. All of us should try our best to help these people have a better life. So what we can do to help them? Here are my advice. First of all,to protect their basic rights,we need to make the law. To make sure that they have the same chance to be educated,the law should endow the right of education to the special people. At the same time,the employer must give them a fair platform for these people. Secondly,to meet the basic needs of life,the government is supposed to offer the certain aid payments to solve their living problems. Most of they can not get a steady job. To improve their living standards,we need do more. Last but not least,we should do some actions to make their mental health. For example,organise volunteer activities. The more communication they have,the happier they will. Communications make them open their closed heart,becoming open and clear. They will change their attitudes to life,so that having more confidence to the world.
