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2008年12月英语四级作文真题:一次性塑料袋

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:15浏览次数:2645
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Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags   
1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用   
2. 造成的问题   
3. 限制使用塑的意义
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;熟练使用了一些长难句。

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There is a problem that the bags was widely used in our society,people was used to use bag when they are out of the supermarket and then they will throw away it usually,which result in the bags become more and more.In fact,it is disadvantage for human and nature. In my opinion,we should be limiting the use of disposal bags as soon as possible.Maybe,someone should ask the reason,why we need take action for it?Use of disposal bags is better for human,and it's convenience for us.Actually,plastic product is not easy to break down,if we use it once and once so that it can be seen everywhere in our life,on a long view,our environment will be break down,the most important is will be effect our life,we are going to face the problem. In conclusion,it is necessary to limit the use of disposal bags.

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