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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用。

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On the picture, there were two people who are on the left is a woman and on the right is a man. They sat in the same on the opposite side of the table, the table with two cups of coffee, one cup. It is a paragraph "11111" below the pictures. Which we can know from the image above is that: under the figure, there is a sentence which is the woman said. And the man and the woman are in speed dating. However, in my opinion, starting from the heart, marriage, honeymoon, to no longer love, finally divorce he spent less than 3 minutes. This is equivalent to in the limited time, the best use of all of the time, and can quickly judge whether the two suits and can become a partner for life. May alone is not enough to show all the problems, but it can explain a lot of problems to a certain extent. Two people together with each other which is not to say that the simple together can. This is the two are and the communication of culture, which is mostly the collision of two families. There are a lot of people who might be good for falling in love, but is not suitable for marriage. Therefore, the lightning marriage actually to some extent or very necessary.

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