拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;熟练使用了一些长难句。
There is a phenomenon that the bags was widely used in our society,people was used to use bag when they are out of the supermarket and then they will throw away it usually,which result in the bags become more and more.In fact,it is disadvantage for human and nature. In my opinion,we should be limiting the use of disposal bags as soon as possible.Maybe,someone should ask the reason,why we need take action for it?Use of disposal bags is better for human,and it's convenient for us.Actually,plastic product is not easy to break down,if we use it once and once so that it can be found everywhere in our life,on a long view,our environment will be break down,the most important is will be effect our life,we are going to face the problem. In conclusion,it is necessary to limit the use of disposal bags.